amir49 0 Posted November 5, 2009 this photo has been captured in the late sunset time with warm lights of sunset rays and its shadows on the mountain , thanx for looking and leaving me your comments . Link to comment
stp 6 Posted November 6, 2009 The backlit trees and slopes are indeed beautiful. You might consider a crop of the few "competitors" of the trees for the viewer's attention. The light in the upper right corner and the tracks in the lower right corner draw my eye away from those trees; I've added a crop that focuses my attention more on the trees and the slopes. In any event, you've shown very nice work. In looking at my own crop, I think you might want to leave a hint of light in the lower left corner; I think I cropped too much. Link to comment
amir49 0 Posted November 6, 2009 thanx estephen for your attention and your critique. you`r right , your crop version is better and ill try to fix it :) . Link to comment
raymondborg 0 Posted November 6, 2009 Wonderful lines and colours. Great lighting. Well done. Link to comment
charity1 0 Posted November 6, 2009 Lovely composition and light - I agree that a tighter crop would improve it some. Ones eyes are initially drawn to the group of tree - which is a strength of the image - but they seem to me a little fuzzy- would make more impact if they were sharper. However all told well done on this one. Link to comment
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