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mario2

Pan on a tripod


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Mario, I wonder whether this would be better if it were a little lighter. It just strikes me as too dark. I love the elements - BG wave and the FG water steaks. It's exactly what I struggle with often so this is said from a fellow traveller rather than a drive by critic. BTW, the horizon is tilted - intentional?
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For my taste the image works well as it is,with a good detail en all areas,but I'm concient that each photographer has his own interpretation and perception sense looking at the same scenery;I'm sure that your apreciation is as good as mine,a bit different but good.Yes the horozon sink a bit,have been a visual mistake,maybe needs to fix correcty this point.Many thanks for your interest in my image.Best regards
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I agree with Jeff. If you're going to print this one it will probably need to be made brighter. Not to go technically off the deep end, but the average pixel brightness is about 90. That is so dark that you will need a flashlight to see many of the details in the photo.

 

It just needs a levels adjustment, which wouldn't change the mood you're trying to create.

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I have been checking the image,I agree with you, I touch of brightness of decrease a bit the contrast or playing together the end result will be better, because now, we lost some areas with detail,I think that woth it.Regards
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of all your "atmospheres" the ones that I find more original and emotional are your vertical crops and especially your seascapes. You master your panning technique and your photos are so beautiful in their minimalism, very difficult to categorize: almost paintings but still clearly photographs, not landscapes nor abstracts... Congratulations!
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