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Good triangular composition, lovely soft light, nice texture in the whites. Good-looking people with interesting expressions.

It feels cut off to me, Like more should be there. I don't like the space on the right. It feels like its just there. serving no purpose. No one is looking that direction, and there is no reason to be looking over there. None that I can see anyways. I realize its using "rule of thirds" well, but it should have been done differently. I love the pose of the new family. Something I notice, is everyone is wearing white. It really adds to the photo. no distracting colors. Everyone matches, and, white as a symbol of purity. Very nice choice. well, thats my 2 cents.

I am with Amy...but I think a closer crop works better for me...It puts the focus more on this sweet moment you have captured so well...Nice Feelings here! Juan

Good job of capturing the feeling. IMHO, the space on the right keeps it less cramped, but should perhaps have been balanced with the inclusion of mom's elbow. Anyway, it does convey the tenderness of the moment, even though it looks as though the baby would rather be elsewhere.

regards

 

DTK