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I personally love this shot. I never posed her once. For this image I

caught her in a random candid moment as she was just enjoying the sun

and the ocean breeze while stroking her hair.

im going to come across as quit horrible here and i really dont mean to but at the momment im prepareing a portfollio of work to take to a set of interview for university courses in photography my work needs much doing to it before i could truely call my self a true photographer or artist for that right, and to me this site has allways been a source of inspiriation were art work is on show and snapshots are ismply fizzled out. i agree that the model loooks natural and the momment captured in her facial explrssion is great but thats about it really artistically there is nothing to the picture, the centre of the frame makeing all the space around her look vacant and it seems not to have been done for a reason and i would suggest a tighter crop or better still a tighter crop on camera werre u had just focusedmainly on head and higher abdomen of your subject. the point im makeing is that yes the model has done her job fantastically she is natural looking and buitiful but clicking the shutter on a camera can be done my any average joe and is not the work of a true photographer, as he or she we do so much more than just press the button, i just suggest that u try thing more creatively with your framing and technique even if its as simple as introduceing depth f field into your work and a tighter crop as this alone would enhance this piece.

thanks and yet again i appologies for my negative comments but i feel it is a helpful critique if taken the right way

regards rob