Koyuki

Please critique...

Your model looks very blue and upset... I think that perhaps its just that the background color isn't a great match for her features/skin color. Maybe too much flash too. The pose is pretty good and she's a pretty girl too. Note that I'm no studio photographer... but just my thoughts. Thanks for sharing it.

I much prefer the other shots in this series, especially the very natural-looking duo with her in the coat. Work on putting her at her ease and posing her carefully - elicit a less intense expression.

The expression is what makes the photo.

 

WEP