Racing thru the Palms

Does this work or is it too messy??

Please give me you thoughts.

Thanks,

Paul

There are parts that do give that sensation of speed & movement; lines going the 'right' direction(s).  But, there are others, like right over the bonnet & windscreen that just look like a blurry palm leaf that just get in the way & distract.  Although, the attempted effect is, still, cool & works w/ the caption.

Sorry, but, you did ask for opinions.

Cheers,
Drew