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I would like some constructive critique on this poster created for a local

band in Ashevill. This is a new field of work for me I would appreciate

any suggestions. Thanks for your time. I have another poster created in

my portfolio in Contagious folder.

Hi Vicki, this layout looks very stiff. I think I would re shoot the portraits, these are too much the same, vary the poses, and use more lights to get rid of that shadow. A symmetrical layout like this one is just too formal, no motion.

Once again Jim thanks for your critique. I have other shots of them I will work with and see what I can come up with.