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I really like this picture, Val. You've caught a good candid moment and your "girl on the right" has an infectiously happy demeanor. The curtains act as a good backdrop, and even the paper foliage in the foreground add textural interest and help to make the framing more soft. A few minor ideas that may be worth considering - the vertical lines in the drapes right above your friend on the right's head is a little bothersome. Is the red spot in her hair a clip of some sort? I wonder if the picture might look better with it sharpened or totally removed. Thanks for sharing!

Thank you for your comments. You are absolutely right about curtains. I didn't see it. It's from scanner. I don't have it on a picture. Unfortunately I don't have a scanner, so this one from a picture at my work and our scanner is very derty and I can't remove it. :-((

The red dot, on my wife's head, is a hair clip.

Unfortunately my girl on the left has died from kidney failure... :-(((((

Val, my condolences. She will live on in your photography. Best wishes.