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thank you

This is a beautiful concept. I like the use of this location and the way the light works on her body. I also like how you plced her against the dark area behind. It feels like your restricted depth of field is placed slightly too far forward. The model and pillars look to me like they are slightly outside the area you want in focus.

Great shot... love the focus!!!

I like the use of a semi constructed (or semi destructed) setting for the nude figure - it creates a nice contrast. However your placing the figure "dead center" in the rectangle is the deadest location to pick. Many people have written ideas about composition and they all suggest that a central location for the central figure should be limited to formal occasions like a wedding or similar. An image like this demands a more dynamic placement!

 

Regards,

 

Jerry