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E' bella. Mi piace come guarda la modella.

Great job on this. There are a lot of angles and there is a lot going on. It is fine just the way it is, but the only subtle change I would make is to brighten her face just slightly. You could probably do it with BW sliders (red and/or yellow) or probably better just lighten it with levels just slightly. Nice job. I don't know what the color version looked like, but I think BW is best here.

A good idea for a framing in the tree. And a willing accomplice ( I mean model...). This shot will stand the test of time even without her feet to show how she is placed in relation to the trunk,-- sort of left undefined, but you could of course always crop above the knee.. (?)..the ground flat road is irrelevant anyway I am thinkiing.

 

She looks like a superb model for your practice. Has that special kind of appealing face, graceful hands. Nice, Joanie, . gs