Guest Guest Posted August 28, 2009 Joaquin, She is a stunning girl. You have focused very well on her eyelashes -- everything is crisply sharp. This could equally be considered a portrait or a beauty/fashion photograph. Her open lips brings a real sensuality to the image. The background works very well with this image. She is separated well from the background. Well done profile -- I can see her left eyelash beyond the bridge of her nose -- excellent. I love her make-up, although there is a little red bleed around her lips that should be fixed. Your composition is very nice. I would like to see you extend the background in front of her to better balance the right and left sides of the photograph. It would be nice it the little flip of her hair by her right eye was back in place with the rest of her hair. There are also some light wispy hairs by her ear that I would have removed. The advertisement for your website is not part of the photograph. A more appropriate place might be the back of your photograph. Nice shot, Mark Link to comment
joaniep 0 Posted August 28, 2009 Magnificent ! Love the way the feathery hat and collar match the wisps of hair . Absolutely beautiful . Link to comment
alones 2 Posted August 29, 2009 A most beautiful photo very well composed . Skin-tone and light work are perfect GREAT WORK !!! Link to comment
elportebonheur 0 Posted August 29, 2009 Muy bueno el resultado obtenido, una imagen de lo más atractiva, Enhorabuena y Saludos.- El Link to comment
rdo 0 Posted August 30, 2009 un perfil interesante, la composición es buena y resalta la expresión del rostro. Bien hecho..! Ricardo Link to comment
amitai schwartz 0 Posted August 31, 2009 Exquisite portrait. Very well done. I guess if you had a magic wand you could cure all the little nits found by one of the previous posters. But I suspect you are not a magician. Instead you captured the moment and this is how it turned out. Nothing wrong with putting your website on the photo either. If someone wants to download it, this makes it quite clear it belongs to you, as it should. Link to comment
jorge_fernandez3 1 Posted September 8, 2009 An intimate gorgeous model. And a perfect image with elegant colors and texture. Espectacular la sigo mirando y me encanta. Muy bello trabajo Joaquin. Saludos desde Miami. Link to comment
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