The storeroom at the art gallery

Critiques appreciated.

Very cool and original.

Very good glamour shot. Congrats.

It is not busy because the contrast, great shot, cheers !

Excellent!!!

 

Alberto

beautiful nude works,

I wonder why you cut off the front of the bike? It seems to me, since the model is reclining on the bike, it is more important to the photo than the artwork in the background. Unlike the other comentors, I also feel the background is incongruous with the motorcycle. All toll, I'm not a fan of this photo... sorry.

Frankly, I find it works very well. I would probably try with the front of the bike included Jim, not for the principle, but in order possibly to round off the perspective. I really like this one, bravo ..

I like it, too, though I would include the front of the bike. Here's another thought. Replace the color elements on the right with B&W elements such as you have on the other side. I think the contrast of the black, white, and silver with the model's skin would be terrifically dramatic.

A little maybe - the paintings in the background may be a little much.

This contains the front of the bike.

 

Jim Phelps

 

 

This is closer to what I meant Jim, thanks. Moving in to the edge of the bike in both case would probably work too ..