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© ® Pavel Kaplun :: www.pictureclub.de :: 2001

Dancing with the past


pavel_kaplun

Digital Composing in Photoshop 5.5

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© ® Pavel Kaplun :: www.pictureclub.de :: 2001

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This is interesting, although not very pleasant. You seem to be very technically able, but your work is generally cluttered, undirected, and even 'tacky'. And it is also not a photograph. Feel free to pan me as I am no Bresson or Adams...
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This is so close to being really successful, I feel, but needs simplifying - there is more than one picture within this image. I would lose the redundant pyramid which is, indeed, leaning at a strange angle, and crop slightly at left and top. This would also move the figure slightly to the left, which would, I think, be an improvement. I know it would be a different picture, but I think you could remove the pillars too, focussing attention on the dove and the veil and leaving a very original portrait.
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