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The setting is wonderful and the placement of legs and torso is fine. You have the model making eye contact with the camera (and thus the viewer of the photo), which implies a glamour/pinup treatment but her facial expression does not seem consonant with that. She shows no happiness of expression. Perhaps if you had her looking elsewhere we would have the feeling of stumbling onto a sunbathing innocent and this would have more of an accidental voyeurism type of feeling. As it stands she has a kind of hate-the-photographer look.

Regards,

Jerry