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In this series of portraits I just tried to show people trying to disconnect

themselves from urban chaos. Some of them manage to achieve this

goal in small parks surrounded by cityscapes. I am not sure if this

juxtaposition is visible or not? Help please...

This is an interesting image, with its conflict between the pose and the age of the subject, but I don't get the urban thing at all. This could be the 'burbs or even some rural community.

I feel the image as a whole is too busy. Too many light spots that steal attention from the subject and just a lot of things (grass, trees, and flowers) in focus. There are also shadows and light patches on the subject. Probably just need to pick a different time of day and shoot more portrait style. Best regards, Brent