Behave

Ina,

Love a girl with a whip! I am only going to make one suggestion. Focus!

This is more of a storytelling picture than a portrait, so there are really many things you can get away with that you wouldn't want to do in a classical portrait. I think it is a fun picture. It would be even more fun if is was in focus. I think it would be even better if shot on location. Put her in a location that goes along with the theme of the photograph and it will be much more interesting.

Nice shot,

Mark

I welcome any advice that can help improve my work.

This shot was spur of the moment. Mila was one of the cast for a low budget short film. While waiting for the set to be ready, we sneaked into an empty space and sunlight was pouring in through the windows. I had her stand against a white pillared wall and quickly snapped away.

The original had more details. Wanting a finished look, I played around with glow filter in Photoshop. Above is the result.