Moncrief Park, Slide

Comments and criticisms are encouraged. Does this photo draw you

in? Are there any elements about it that detract from its effectiveness.

Thank you for your time. JR

What a gorgeous shot! The lighting is superb, the tones great, and the shadows inviting. Two things that bother me...very minorly though. 1. The left most support of that platform at the top of the slide is leaning very very slightly to the right. For some reason it's really distracting to my eye...others probably won't even notice it! So take that with a grain of salt as the other lines are just fine. 2. The end of the slide is cut off. Great night shot, sir!

I was also bothered by the cutting off of the slide and very disappointed when I developed the film. I had framed to closely, forgetting that the film holder cuts off a little of what I can see in the ground glass. JR