Himachal

Please Critique. Thanks for your time and comment.

Hi, there's heavy frame for me. Try with tinner one :)

The other one - there's no primary object inthe picture, and the mountain's too flat. You should cut some clouds. The middle plan is too dark and you got no front plan too...

 

 

Greetings, and try again :)

Thanks Petar for your valuable comments. It was converted to B&W by desaturating in GIMP. I got back to the original version and see that the foreground and the middle part are not so dim and dull. Should I have done a channel mixing instead of simply desaturating? Do you think a pano framing would make it more interesting if I crop out (remove) the not so interesting sky and some of the foreground? Thanks again for your inputs.