Bicycle close-up 1

Comments welcome, thank you

I think it would be a good idea to crop off the white thing on the right - it is distracting from the nice brass part, which for me is the main subject. In fact here I might consider a drastic crop to also eliminate the spokes of the wheel. This would leave you with a more abstract image, but I think it would be stronger.

Dear Dominique,

Thank you for your comment. Next time I can steal my son's bicycle, I will try a new view!