shotz 0 Posted December 27, 2002 asleep in the bedroom she shares with a dozen others Link to comment
gareth_harper 0 Posted December 28, 2002 Would like more detail about the shot.If she shares this room with a dozen others, would it have been possible to have made use of those other cots for even more impact? Link to comment
emilymcleod 0 Posted December 30, 2002 The only thing I really don't like is the black nothingness in the foreground. Link to comment
pampolin 1 Posted December 30, 2002 Composition is not good. I think you need to show better your target Link to comment
big james 0 Posted February 5, 2003 I like the feet sticking out of the bars would have been great to get that as the focus. I just a close up would have been good. As well as what others have said about needing more impact, knowing more about the subject, etc... Link to comment
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