Break time 2

It is always difficult to critic pictures that one is not able to make.

however i'll do it

The photo is a little difficult to read. What i think interesting is the diamond of four faces.

So i think you would crop the high of photo, just above th back face, becuase it spoil the picture , without giving any information. I would put a little more light with photoshop on the first people.

Perhaps a little step at the left would have place the face of the first people at a less centered place.

 

However it is a beautiful photo

 

Good scene well captured. I like the diagonal made by the four men. IMO Pingu is right about cropping closer to the top guy's head.

Wonderful, full of emotion.

I like their expressions, but I think the cut on top could be just a little down. Nice anyway

comments are welcome