The Rift

This is a black and white treament of a coastal shot from Laig bay,

the Isle of Eigg.

A very beautiful picture

Perfect ^^^ Best regards

 

***Ali***

Very nice composition.

I really like the composition Jane with the sharp ridge leading to the mountains in the distance and the mono conversion is very good tonally but i can't help thinking that your focussing is off here. The background looks as it should, but the foreground is soft and lacking definition from focussing too far into the scene.

 

I hope this will be taken as a constructive comment as the atmosphere and sense of place is excellent and i do like this photo.

 

best wishes, Dave.

I'm seeing only a touch of softness in the foreground, but it's not sufficient (IMO) to detract from the photo. Like David, I think your composition is great: I like the amount of space you've given to the foreground, and the clouds somewhat mirror what's happening on the ground. The title fits the photo as well. Nicely done.