'looking up', taken at a parkade.

taken at a parkade. Scanned from print of Ilford xp2, removed ugly

cast in PS, everything else is same as print. Comments welcomed.

Like the composition. The window adds perspective and a very nice frame. I am not sure I like seeing the end of the window, though (top right triangle)... have you tried cropping it out? Another thing I would try is increasing contrast between sky and the truck. Maybe lowering the curve in photoshop can work, and it may even show some details in the sky, so it would look more interesting.