grapes&iris

Some thoughts about spring... Thank you for the visit.

Here are a number of suggestions that may help in the future,

 

First is to tighten the composition. What you have feels far too loose.

 

Second is to think about using a vertical format when there is one tall object, in this case a flower. It will also help the composition because you'll have group the shorter items closer together.

 

Third is to use bounce light from the top as your main light source. You can then use fill light from the sides or just reflectors for more control. Your grapes in this shot don't have much separation, and the bases of the green bottle and vase go very dark.

 

Details are important. The paper towel in the vase shouldn't be visible. The grapes might be more attractive were they to spill over the front of the dish, and the stems would be better hidden.

 

I feel like you've made a good start, but take your time. Studio work is the most difficult to accomplish in many instances. The more time you take the better the results. If you have any questions feel free to ask.

Wow Glenn!

In English I've never gotten the critique as completed as you did! Thank you so much. I do not have the studio and correct lightning, but I'll try to imitate it. Your comment visualizes for me some ideas about the light.

Nadya, I'm glad you found my critique helpful. Even without a studio and professional lighting you can do a great deal with simple clamp lights and daylight balanced incandescent bulbs. Keep working at it and you'll succeed. You're heading in the right direction. Best regards, Glenn