randall ellis 2 Posted August 12, 2009 Overall I kind of like this one, but it feels too heavily weighted on the left side and the bright sky in the upper right pulls my eye away from the subject. I like that there is some in focus texture in the metal, and I'm intrigued by the line of the smaller metal pipe at the far left edge - it works well with the horizontal lines of the barbed wire. To my eye, this seems like it would be stronger if it were a little tighter in on the foreground object, which would reduce the background and throw it farther out of focus. I'd also like to see a bit more detail in the main object there if possible, maybe a little fill flash to bring it up just a bit and emphasize the details, but that's just how I would have taken this one. Keep it coming. Your rust never sleeps folder has some good stuff in it... - Randy Link to comment
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