Porcelain

Andrei,

Stunning girl - I love the composition - Your background sets the mood for intrigue - The shallow depth of field draws the viewer's eyes to your subject - Nice focus on her eyes - Good catch lights - Very good eye make-up - I like her skin tone - Her jacket is just right.

I think I would have burned the sky just a little (My eyes are drawn to the brightness) - I wish her eyes were open a little more - I would like to see her lips just a little darker.

Nice portrait of a beautiful girl,

Mark