matthijs 0 Posted April 8, 2009 I like it but there seems to be something missing. Hard to put into words so I'll just ramble: I'm missing a kind of depth and tension to make this picture worth loking at for longer periods or more often. Whether that tension is to be found in adding elements, or removing elements to create a sense of wonder or whether it can be found in adding texture to the visible elements I'm not sure. The stone or the steel could be of more interest, the sky could have colors or clouds. Lines could clash, converge or diverge more. Any of these might help in creating an image that would captivate and intrigue. Hope this helps, Matthijs. Link to comment
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