portrait Secret Love

Dag,

Nice soft romantic photograph - good high-key photo except for the overdone, over black fake eyelashes on the top girl - bottom girl needs better mascara work and make-up - bottom girl's out of focus area around her eye is way overdone (you lost her eyebrow and all texture in her skin) - good background

"24pixel.de by DaggyDuck" is not part of the image. Do not include it in your picture. Put any extranious information on a mat or better yet, on the back of a mat.

Good image,

Mark

I agree with Mark on the make-up too much on the eyes on top girl....hardly any on the bottom girl I think that I would like a bit of vibrant red lipstick on both girls.Bottom girl maybe a bit too much of an up the nose shot?

I really like the soft textures.

Very good picture though...I like it

I think this is a fantastic shoot... The mood in the shoot fits perfect with the light and color tones.. And the models are doing a splendid work... Excellent shoot..

All the best, Jill