Is fall here?

I was raking leafs when this leaf popped out of nowhere. I felt the

leaf calling out to be remembered.

I have three little suggestions, which seems like a lot, but they're all small:

1. the leaf stands out for two reasons, his colour, and his species. I'd yank out that large brown leaf bottom centre, and leave your green leaf standing against oak leaves only.

2. What's that black bit, bottom left? Coat? Knee? Shoe?

3. Perhaps a different composition, with the green leaf off-centre would liven things up a bit. Or perhaps not.

Kate.