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I have submitted another version of the portrait following the

suggestions given by you all. Please rate and critique.

the eyes in this photo is incredible strong!

well done,Alessio.

Very interesting character portrait. The texture lighting across the front of her face is very good at showing wrinkles and lines of life. She is looking to my left so I would have left the larger space on the left, not the right. The lit background to the right distracts me from the subject. I do so wish the shadows did not go to complete black on her face.

Her face says a lot!

To me this is a strong photo! Well done!

Buenos tonos y acertada composición.

Good portrait , Beautiful expression and colors

I love the colors and the strange expression of the old lady.....congratulation :) Bea

Beautiful light and expression. I love the close crop and sharp detail. Well done!