becca

comments and critiques welcome. Just practicing, would like to do portrait

photography one day

I love the face and the framing of unkempt strands of hair. Great focus on eyes. Cropping/zooming to the face and hair alone would improve the portrait. The girl's top and the white triangle of sky in upper right of background are distracting and unnecessary. Try it in a photo editor and see if I'm not right... Good luck!