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Do you see any way I could improve this? Would another angle on the

leaf show more gesture? Is it not sharp enough?

 

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Anthony, I believe this to be quite an original approach; however, I would indeed suggest more sharpness to it; light on the other hand, is just perfect.

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It's quite interesting, but I think you should remove the spot in the center of the green area. The eye ultimately travels to that spot.