Erin....

I am looking for critiques. Would like to know how I could have or

can make this photo better. Thanks in advance for your time.

I love how when people ask for a critique they never get one. Well, here you go. Personally i would crop some of the black off the rt. side of the shot. I love the lines on her, I think that their could be a little more tonality to the shot. I do like the fact that she is looking out the window and not at the camara. Well, hope this is what you were looking for. I also never get critiques when i ask for them. I can have a shot looked at 100 times and no one will critique it. What is up with that. Linda

I like the way that you light it. I agree with Linda a little bit less of black on the right. But the expression and the tones are very good.

I wouldn’t change a thing… Looks great!