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This is from a series of mask shots. I would love to some imput on this

shot. Too close, to strange or is it just missing something. Linda

Hello again Linda. Like the rest of your work, I love this capture. If you look at my work you will clearly see that you should take true critique I give with a grain of salt. The only issues I see that I would like to see changed are the difference in brightness between the two eyes and the fact that there the second "catch light" in the right eye (left for the viewer) is really hard to make out. I like that she doesn't appear to be looking into the camera, it adds some mystery for me. Did you add a post production vignette or is that in camera? Keep em coming kid!

PDE