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From a recent set of experiments. Comments are welcome.

I like this image, mostly light and expression. I dont really that the shadow works, I think it may but it is notclear what role it plays here. Still it is a good image. Regards PK

A very good photo - the only flaw is the "heavy" shadow on the face of the subject.

 

Bravo!

I like this one. The shadow in the back seems seperated from her - you need to link them together better. Shadow on her face is a little too much and the left hand may be in danger of being too bright - the print would tell you better than what we see on the screen.

ricardo, sorry i haven't been looking your work for a while. i like this shot very much: the point i mostly like is how the 2 heads are on frame's diagonal, considering she is looking low right and pointing the head at the lower right corner this enforces the composition and allows me to accpet the black space on the right. it is your shadow lightpainted on the left? if it is so how did u accomplish to get only the shadow? there is a balance between the male shadow and the female figure.. a see - don't see game that gives the image a strong personality. well done to me

forty three rates, but only four comments. . . . .

 

First, I assume it's her shadow, then I'm not sure. Either way I like it, except that the thumb sticking up on the shadow detracts from what I think should be just a vague shape with no detail at all so you can attach whatever meaning you like between it and her.