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nice subject but I think it lacks some punch. Also I find the background to be somewhat distracting. A slightly shallower depth of field together with a lower point of view could have proved to be more interesting while it wouldn't have changed your original idea I think.

This one was taken with my point and shoot. I went back to this scene soon after I got my new cam and made several new photo's.

 

I will post the best one and would like to hear what you think once I did.

 

It might take a while. I am experiencing some serious computer problems here. Help is on it's way though.