k2

all thoughts welcomed

Maybe soften her skin just a touch, also the bright yellow light to the left is distracting. It looks as though the light on her face is sunlight reflected off a mirror. The light on her eyes and forehead have more of a golden glow than the light on her cheeks and chin. Was flash used at all? Nice shot however, she has really nice eyes.

 

Matt

yes. sb600 camera left.

I agree with Matt...I like this portrait overall, but there are a few minor technical issues that detract from the aesthetics. I like the composition...good choice of a horizontal framing...also nice job blurring the background to ensure nothing draws my attention away....the yellow light isn't really an issue for me. She does indeed have beautiful eya and hair, but her skin tones are uneven and appear blotchy...I love her freckles but would recommend trying to even out the skin tones on her face and warming it up just a touch.

thnak you for the comments on this photo. it is one of my favs, so im happy to get the help and opinions on it.. ill redo it with the tips.

 

thanks again!