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Thanks!

Could be a good photo but it suffers from harsh lighting,noise and artifacts int eh sky, the bookbag distracts and adds clutter to teh photo. Also, her hand is blocking her face, I would have suggested to her to use her other hand perhaps.

 

Keep shooting and have fun!

evan

I offer these comments to be helpful, not negatively critical. I think that the woman's arm blocks her face and cuts off the focal point of the image. Also, I suggest you get in tighter. The bags in the picture and towel or whatever the white object is detract and clutter the picture. If I wanted to see the ocean and hills in the background, I'd go for sharp depth of field in the entire image. Otherwise, I'd get in closer and feature the woman and the sunglasses. I hope this helps.