mr. mark 0 Posted January 4, 2009 Hello everyone, fairly new to the studio, took this portraityesterday, comments most appreciated ! Mark Link to comment
ddob 0 Posted January 6, 2009 Good composition. The lighting on the models face could be a little softer. Link to comment
vanmelick 0 Posted January 6, 2009 Agree with the previous comment. I just saw a similar picture which has a little out of focus on the legs, which bring more attention to the face: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=8475903 Link to comment
mattbuser 0 Posted January 6, 2009 Ditto on the previous 2 comments, a little less focus on the feet and a little less light on the face, just dial it down a notch. Did you diffuse it at all with an umbrella or softbox? Matt Link to comment
mr. mark 0 Posted January 7, 2009 Thanks guys for the feedback The single light source was a softbox, but I had it at medium strength, I think I could have dialed it down to minimum. I have a couple shoots this weekend and this should help me. Mark Link to comment
alberto_quintal 2 Posted January 11, 2009 Lovely, so natural, I like it, I saw your work in pbase too,fantastic!!! Alberto Link to comment
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