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Comments are appreciated.

hey there i really like this photo because the black and white is grate and the skin tones are really nice. the photo is very pleasing to look at, grate lighting. but the expression on the models face isn't quite right i think. the photo has a playful feel to it and the models expression looks a little false. but it is still a very nice photo.

I differ from the previous critique, although I am new at taking picture, I am not new at looking at them. I actually enjoy the midway facial expression, as if you captured her rgith before saying something. very natural, very nice. Great work.