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This is one from my first shots with digital camera. I'm very

interesting for your critique.

I feel that you either are too close or too far out. There is a sort of middling composition here that needs a bit of work.

With respect, I think you're on the right track but this doesn't quite work. You need to be closer or further away and find some lighting that makes the glass sparkle and the lemon yellow pop. There is a photographer on this stie who does really well with thsi sort of thing. i can't remember his name, but look at the highly reated photos and you'll find him.