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I like the compo and I thing it is a beautiful portrait..what is that over her head?

I think you are on the right track with this but needs some work. Your model is beautiful and I want to see her sharp and in focus. I feel that this is way too soft and her hand cropped out of frame is distracting as well. Her foot also coming directly out of the back of her head might be rethought and shifted to the side.This is just my honest opinion and by no means trying to be disrespectful. Regards,

Evan

You are both wright, I will take some time to make this photo better. Ines

Cheer Ines, just have fun and keep shooting!!!

 

Take care,

Evan

I agree with Evan's comments but not for the sharpness. I love the blurring of the arms, its just a tat to harsh in comparisment with her face.Did you ad blur??

Nice pic anyway

 

P.

Thanks, and yes I did ad blur. I was not happy with the texture of her skin. I agree with You, maybe too much blur. Ines

ima potencijala (model, poza, relax), malkice jos tehnike..;-))

 

..darko

Tehnike?? Sapni....psst

evo:

1.ne bluraj u PS-u, vidi se

2.imas FF Canon 5D, kupi si 50/1.4 ili neki portretni objektiv 85/1.4, 105/2 ili 180/2.8

3.fotkaj blendom otvorenom do kraja

 

Ovdje si zablurala lice i ostavila oci i usta ostro, sta je neprirodno u normalnom fotkanju,

imas super potencijal /biranje motiva, oko.../ keep on!

Pitaj!!

 

darko

A pazi sad: imam 50.1,4. Ovo je fotkano 85.1,8. Malo je previse zblurano u PS, slazem se no htjela sam postici mekocu koze tijela, ocito neuspjesno. I hvala na mom oku!! :-))