Christine

I appreciate a lot your comments and ratings on this photograph.

A superb portrait. Apart from the great technical quality, I like it because of its simplicity, without any ostentatious pose or contrived expresisions. Great job.

You have a great sincere portrait here, the model being genuinely expressive.

 

I can't find many flaws at all. The pose has a nice "C" curve. The key is very solid for a low key image.

 

I added a little on the left for balance. I also toned down the highlight on her nose; it was making her nose appear a bit protruding. I also reduced the shadows on her face, especially around her eyes and cheek bones.

 

I dodged the scleras (the whites of the eye) and the catch lights of the eye for extra "pop".

 

I also added an edge treatment.

 

If you don't find my suggestions helpful, then please send me an email and I will be happy to delete them for you. But if you have any questions, don't hesitate to email me, either.