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critique please

Look at those eyes! I love the expresion and tones. Well done. 6/6

Great clarity with this!

It appears you used lighting from a floor lamp quite well, getting some modeling out of the face and keeping the dark hair showing. It is just my personal choice but using lipstick on a child, so that it is apparent is wrong. One can use a computer tool to increase the saturation of the natural lip color after the picture is taken and it looks superior.