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please reate an write a critique..

thnx

Hi Miha, I like idea and concept of this one !!!

A few suggestion if I may ?

You know they Like prefection for this commercial things.

IMHO your model should have better make up, mouth should be closed( or opened) , bottom line of image paralleled whit nose line, and you could left more space at the top - more room for designers work.

I really like background ! And one more thing, in my opinion you DOFis to small, you should try to get nose and eyes in focus.

Wish you luck and all the best !!!

Cheers

Adnan

huh, thanx for the nice an constructive critic, all things are true (well i'd maybe leave the dof as it is) the problem about make up is that we did it by ourselves,.. and when i tryed to crop with the nose line didn't like it because it turned up kind of too simetrical.

best regards..

miha