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Let me know what you think!

It's a bit blown, and it's a real shame her dress is cut off.

 

A good idea though!

I would have liked to see the rest of her dress, instead of it being cropped off. Also, the huge white cloud detracts attention from the bride a little too much. Maybe you could make the cloud a little less bright?

i didn't like that the dress was cut off either--too artsy/drastic for wedding photography. on second thought, it makes sense, since the cloud is cut off, too.

 

i'd adjust the horizon a hair by bringing up the left side and tone down the brightness.

 

love the idea!