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At Point Mugu

Interesting slice of life type of shot. I wonder if, had you taken it more from beside the airplane, the guys' faces (even though both are masked) would have been more clear, and you could have established more of a connection between the two, which is the thing of most interest about this photo. The way the cord leads from the erk to the plane and points directly at the pilot really adds a graphic dimension to the link between the two, but it takes a moment from this angle to notice that the pilot is even there.

Good comment(s). I got focused on the airplane, filling the frame, looking for an interesting angle, etc. A few more feet to the left and I could have gotten both their faces, and plenty of jet if I had moved out, just a bit perhaps.