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Critique welcome!

First and foremost is the size of the image. It much too small and gives the impression of softness to an unorthodox but working composition. The bag/backpack on the couch and the white object in the upper left hand corner area really come across as distractions to the otherwise clean design quality of this shot.

i agree, the image is too much small. I like the point of view and the compo.