Pre-wedding candid

Your black and white tones are very good. I wish the photo had been taken from a slightly different angle, perhaps from more to the left and from lower down, so that the people and furniture were upright. Interesting subjects. Keep posting I want to see more of your photos!

lacks a bit in contrast, but you nailed the scene. Nice angle, good crop.

General comments and criticism welcome...thanks!

I like the angle and the feel of the photo. It says to me: "bored out of our minds."

It is just a tad tight on the left and loose on the right, but the angle gives it a cool dynamic feel. A more straight on shot would've ruined the feel of this photo.

Good Job.

Hi Jill, I wouldn't change a thing (except maybe the contrast), great shot !

Thanks for sharing.

I LIKE the tilt on this one. And love the mom and kids expressions. AGain, the tone is a little grey to me, but that may just be my screen. I think it is a darling capture.