Summer Dreams

Thanks for comments on this portrait!

and I can only see a very few minor flaws. One is that you have an eye socket shadow on her left eye. You can either dodge it out, or turn her head a little more into the window.

 

Also, I think you can benefit by some good old-fashioned vignetting here. I gave the image a PhotoShop vignette by using the eliptical marquee selection tool at a 90 pixel feather, selecting the inverse, and using the brightness control to darken the edges.

 

Your image could use some edge treatment. I gave it one I thought would enhance it.

 

This really is a fine image, Guido.

 

(If you don't find my critique helpful, just send me an email and I will be happy to delete it.)

Beautiful portrait with a light that suits the mood and the child.

It has become better, I think, after Steve's interventions.

Beautiful child portrait , She looks a bit sad :(

I agree with the above. Beautiful b/w.

Thanks for your contributions. I think that Steve's edits do improve this portait. Very constructive and inspiring critique!